I attempted to write a song but I think it ended up being more of a poem. So anyways, please read n let me know how it is..It is called "Crush"...
You walk right past me,
Perfectly oblivious,
To what you do to me,
How much more obvious,
Do you want me to be,
To show you,
How I feel.
Your smile,
Leaves me breathless,
Your eyes,
Leaves me mesmerised,
Just looking at you,
Leaves me speechless.
Why oh why,
Do I feel this way,
Why oh why,
You make my day,
Why oh why,
My heart beats fast,
When you are close by.
Look at me,
Look at you,
Can’t you see,
That’s what,
I want you to do?
I promise,
You won’t regret,
I promise,
You won’t forget,
Just look at me,
Why don’t you,
Just look at me.
You walked past,
I kept hoping,
And suddenly you smiled,
A beautiful smile,
I just kept staring,
All this while,
And praying,
This moment will last.
Why oh why,
Do I feel this way,
Why oh why,
You make my day,
Why oh why,
My heart beats fast,
When you are close by.
7 comments:
hehe...its different from you other "Dark" ones....
Definitely a style u shud continue writing in...
:D
oh yea....who's the crush?
hey i thought of xy (gosh it was so long ago come to think of it, rite? heee) when i read your song/ poem! it's something most pple with a crush can relate too haa. Nice! Hope to see you write more. *Hugs* Hang in there with work by the way! Jiayou~
ooohh!! has shreosi found herself a man?? ;)
LOL Nadya, I think shreosi most definitely HAS found herself a man!! ;)
hahahhaha :P:P
prith:
hehe thx for ur comments...
tats a secret..ssshhh ;)
ming choo:
hehe yeaaa...tat sounds like such a long time ago..n he did haf a nice smile no?? :P
thx darling..n u hang in thre for ur labs! :)
nadya & medha: hehehehe...i may haf found myself a man..a tall dark n handsome man..or mayb not!!
tryin to be mysterious here..im sure its working...
or mayb not :P
lol shreosi.. you n mysterious don't really go together :p so are you saying instead of a man, you found a boy instead? O.o
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